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Half-boy: Half girl by ~depressed-writer:icondepressed-writer:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Spoken Word


I want to be half boy, half girl
I like certain parts, and not others
I like my rough boys frame,
I hate my boyish scraggly arms,
I hate the way my hair falls into a part if I let it grow just a touch too long,
I hate the way my breasts hang heavy against my chest
But I love the way my waist curves in to part my womanly chest from my tight little boyish hips
I love the way my calves are curvy, and that I have 'girlish' legs
I hate the way my muscles refuse to grow, no matter how hard I work out
I like that I can be taken, as both a girl, and a boy,
And either way, I’m assumed to like girls
I'm either a straight boy, or a very gay girl
And yet it frustrates me when they assume I am one or the other, and I have no in between
Can I not be a girl down below and a boy up top, is that idea so hard to comprehend?
I'm not a boy, but I'm not a girl either,
I suppose I lay somewhere in the middle.
©2008-2009 ~depressed-writer
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check it out and let me know what you think

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~ForgottenFaery Nov 11, 2008, 7:22:34 PM
Wow.... nice

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~depressed-writer Nov 11, 2008, 7:27:37 PM
thanks :)

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~Nothing Matters. We all end up in a coffin or an urn.~
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~ForgottenFaery Nov 11, 2008, 7:29:34 PM
not a problem, it sounds a lot like what I feel like.... so I <3 it

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-----Religion-----

A smart person with a stupid idea is more dangerous than 1million stupid people with 1million stupid Ideas
:icondepressed-writer:
~depressed-writer Nov 11, 2008, 7:31:58 PM
yeah, i finally got the courage to write it down - it's something that I've toyed with in my head, but never wanted to say out loud... I'm glad someone else feels the same way.

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~Nothing Matters. We all end up in a coffin or an urn.~
:iconforgottenfaery:
~ForgottenFaery Nov 11, 2008, 7:33:39 PM
well just letting you know you're not alone at all with those types of feelings I am pretty sure there are at least 5 more people in your home town that have thought about it before just haven't had enough, for a lack of better word balls, to say anything about it

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-----Religion-----

A smart person with a stupid idea is more dangerous than 1million stupid people with 1million stupid Ideas
:icondepressed-writer:
~depressed-writer Nov 11, 2008, 7:40:13 PM
ha ha, I;m sure of it too :) thanks!!

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~Nothing Matters. We all end up in a coffin or an urn.~
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Mood: Neutral *Packbat Nov 11, 2008, 7:47:19 PM
It caught my attention from the first line, but it seems to take a lurch in the middle when the "I [want/like/hate/love]" motif ends. Not sure how to fix, though...

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There are no real paradoxes in science; the apparant paradoxes are merely nature's polite way, sotto voice, of informing us that our understanding is incomplete or erroneous.
- Thomas Gold
:icondepressed-writer:
~depressed-writer Nov 11, 2008, 7:51:16 PM
yeah, i see what you mean.! and i don't know how to fix it either!
thanks for the comment, i will think about it some more :) :)

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~Nothing Matters. We all end up in a coffin or an urn.~
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Mood: Joy ~DeviantlyEnlightened Nov 14, 2008, 9:23:56 PM
i loved many people should write this feelings down.

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why cant love be as easy as 2+2 I know that equals 22.

?+?=:heart:

:rose::blackrose::rose::blackrose::rose::blackrose:RIP Daivd N.:rose::blackrose::rose::blackrose::rose::blackrose:
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~Over-My-Head41 Nov 17, 2008, 4:13:48 PM
Hmm. This is very interesting. This describes me a bit. I like parts of being a girl, some parts I hate.

"I hate the way my breasts hang heavy against my chest."

:+fav: :thumbsup:

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Dave Grohl: Yeah, I’ve been wearing them ever since.
Kurt Cobain to Krist Novoselic: Here, you wanna wipe with this?
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